TANGLED by Venetia Peterson

1/5/2012

8 Comments

 
_It is easy to forget
summer grass
in November
as we ran through it
untangling it
or was it left tangled
after we, us
in a delicious scent
of "we shall never die."

8 Comments
Linda Crate link
1/5/2012 10:46:43 am

Simple yet eloquent - what an enchanting piece! I adore it.

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Venetia link
1/6/2012 07:09:27 am

Thank so much Linda. : )

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Michael Morris link
1/5/2012 12:35:48 pm

Nice, compact use of metaphor. Says exactly all it needs to, and says is a-plenty. Fine poem.

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Venetia
1/6/2012 07:15:39 am

A very pleasing comment. Thank you Michael. :)

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